My name is Cameran Swartzlender and I am in Mr. Farnum’s and I want to be an author when I grow up so I will tell you a story and then if you read my story and think it is good then please write a comment. So listen up and read my story.
Once upon a time there was a girl named PRIMROSE and she loved to ride Prince her horse. She would ride all day and all night, she would ride in the meadow and in the barn yard and she would ride in the water and in any place you could ride a horse.
But one day when Primrose walked out of her house she saw that Prince was missing. Ho no Prince is gone Prince is gone! Prince is gone! Mom, dad, help Prince is gone! I can’t find him. Sweetie do we really have to deal with this at 6:00 in the morning?
Yes we have to find Prince, oh my poor Prince would if he is hurt he needs me. Okay we can go find Prince, but as soon as we get home we are going to bed and you can’t bother us okay. Yes just as long as I don’t have to go to bed. Okay but you have to be quiet.
I will I promise. Good now let’s go find Prince. Wait who am I going to ride on? Moonbeam, she is a nice horse just like Prince and it is easy to get to know her you will like her. Are you sure I will like Moonbeam? I love Prince and that is the horse that loves me.
That is not true all the horses loved you since you were a baby they don’t care if you need a ride. Great lets go. We walked down to moon bean stall and I looked in stall yes that was moon bean she was a tall grey horse with white socks and she had a small scar that was bleeding. Is she okay how did she get that scar?
Oh, same as every horse some times in your life you get hurt. Okay let’s go find Prince. We were all out of the stall and on to our horses and we are off mom called lets go I called and we were off riding in to the woods that is where we thought we would fide Prince first. But we were wrong Prince was nowhere in the woods.
So next we checked the river no sight of Prince any were. There is only one place Prince could be now and that is where we checked the horse shelter she road home and then put our horses away and then dad started up the truck and we all hoped in to go to the horse shelter.
We are here great now come on lets go before Prince is bought. We ran inside and ho no Prince. Well, well shelly that is my horse and you can’t have it. Well that is now her horse. Said the girl that owned the pet store. No you don’t understand that is my horse and he ran away from home and we have been looking for hours and that is my horse.
Prince why did you run away from home now you are going to be with Shelly, I hate Shelly. And I hate you. Shut up Shelly this has nothing to do with you because that is my horse and I am not leaving without him.
Um yes you are because I already paid for him and I don’t care if you want you him back. Wait mom dad we paid for Prince when I was born right. Yes. And /we have had Prince for 10 years right? Yes. And we have a stall for him that says his name.
85,000 dollars for Prince and I will let you come ride and see Prince once a week okay. Deal. Wait sweetie that is your horse and he has known you since you were a baby and he has never forgotten you but now you want to forget about Prince are you sure you want to do this? Yes when one door closes another one will open okay. Okay.
Wait can I keep Prince at your barn and I will keep his name Prince if you want. Yes Shelly yes.
Days later I bought a new horse and named it Princess to go with Prince and I started charity to raise money for that animal shelter to help the horses and me and Shelly became best friends and raised 30,000 dollars to save horses. THE END.
Once upon a time there was a girl named PRIMROSE and she loved to ride Prince her horse. She would ride all day and all night, she would ride in the meadow and in the barn yard and she would ride in the water and in any place you could ride a horse.
But one day when Primrose walked out of her house she saw that Prince was missing. Ho no Prince is gone Prince is gone! Prince is gone! Mom, dad, help Prince is gone! I can’t find him. Sweetie do we really have to deal with this at 6:00 in the morning?
Yes we have to find Prince, oh my poor Prince would if he is hurt he needs me. Okay we can go find Prince, but as soon as we get home we are going to bed and you can’t bother us okay. Yes just as long as I don’t have to go to bed. Okay but you have to be quiet.
I will I promise. Good now let’s go find Prince. Wait who am I going to ride on? Moonbeam, she is a nice horse just like Prince and it is easy to get to know her you will like her. Are you sure I will like Moonbeam? I love Prince and that is the horse that loves me.
That is not true all the horses loved you since you were a baby they don’t care if you need a ride. Great lets go. We walked down to moon bean stall and I looked in stall yes that was moon bean she was a tall grey horse with white socks and she had a small scar that was bleeding. Is she okay how did she get that scar?
Oh, same as every horse some times in your life you get hurt. Okay let’s go find Prince. We were all out of the stall and on to our horses and we are off mom called lets go I called and we were off riding in to the woods that is where we thought we would fide Prince first. But we were wrong Prince was nowhere in the woods.
So next we checked the river no sight of Prince any were. There is only one place Prince could be now and that is where we checked the horse shelter she road home and then put our horses away and then dad started up the truck and we all hoped in to go to the horse shelter.
We are here great now come on lets go before Prince is bought. We ran inside and ho no Prince. Well, well shelly that is my horse and you can’t have it. Well that is now her horse. Said the girl that owned the pet store. No you don’t understand that is my horse and he ran away from home and we have been looking for hours and that is my horse.
Prince why did you run away from home now you are going to be with Shelly, I hate Shelly. And I hate you. Shut up Shelly this has nothing to do with you because that is my horse and I am not leaving without him.
Um yes you are because I already paid for him and I don’t care if you want you him back. Wait mom dad we paid for Prince when I was born right. Yes. And /we have had Prince for 10 years right? Yes. And we have a stall for him that says his name.
85,000 dollars for Prince and I will let you come ride and see Prince once a week okay. Deal. Wait sweetie that is your horse and he has known you since you were a baby and he has never forgotten you but now you want to forget about Prince are you sure you want to do this? Yes when one door closes another one will open okay. Okay.
Wait can I keep Prince at your barn and I will keep his name Prince if you want. Yes Shelly yes.
Days later I bought a new horse and named it Princess to go with Prince and I started charity to raise money for that animal shelter to help the horses and me and Shelly became best friends and raised 30,000 dollars to save horses. THE END.